Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Monday, April 20, 2020
walking through the woods
This is my story about the creature the being walking through the woods and on how they were feeling.
If I was a small or even big creature i would have lots going through my mind because it might be scary meaning what they are.
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Hi Isla,
ReplyDeleteMy favourite word that you used today is 'overwhelmed'. What a great word to use to describe how something small can feel surrounded by something big. Great work!