Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, April 23, 2020
10 years in the future Isla
This is my story I made up about something I like but might not like in ten years when I am 20. I made up this random story on how I got sick from an apple that had a bug in it. I really liked doing this I think this stretched my imagination. I hope you like it.
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Well done Isla
ReplyDeleteYou used some great adjectives in your writing, I'm glad you really do like apples still though, well done!
Hi Isla, I really like your writing about yourself ten years in the future, it is very cool and I thought it was a real story but you just made it up! Good job
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