Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, March 25, 2020
Teeth
This is the short piece about the two guys point of view on a funny short story. I really liked to do this and it was very fun. I liked doing things like this so here is mine.
1 comment:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.
Hi Isla,
ReplyDeleteI think something may have gone wrong when publishing it. Try again and if you are still having trouble, let me know and I will help you.